Dear father,                                                         

This Sunday is Father’s Day. I am very happy. I’m writing a letter for you now. But my classmates are playing games.

Today is rainy. Please take care. Do you know? My study is good. There fore, don’t worry about my study. I have a good news to tell you. I have won the second award at the piano competition. Are you happy ?

On the weekend, I usually go hiking on the Song Shan Lake. We are very happy. But after we walk for a long time, we feel a little tired. When the sun goes down, we return home. I like going hiking. What about you?

Happy Father’s Day to you !

                                         Yours

                                         Shiqi

点评：该学生能综合运用所学过的英语，正确运用时态，例如现在进行时和一般现在时，向父亲讲诉了自己目前的学习情况，表达了对父亲浓浓的爱，富有真情实感。